This post affords an objective evaluation of an essay.
Description
At the end of the semester, you will submit to me this critique and draft along with your final draft of this essay. If you do not do such, you will receive an F for the incomplete assignment (refer to "Overview of Course").
I edited your essay in accordance with "Criteria for Evaluating Essays," using proofreader's marks (refer to "Proofreader's Marks"). As you revise this essay, do not correct only your punctuative, grammatical and mechanical mistakes. Remember, revision is a process. You will need to consider your peer's and my comments. Then, revise your essay according to its purpose, structure and content--checking for unity, checking for coherence, checking for development, creating a thesis. Next, edit each sentence, and title your essay.
Because this is a preliminary draft, I did not calculate a grade. If you want to do such, add the values of the applicable components (1-11, for example) and divide the sum by the amount of components (11, for example).
Evaluation
Name of writer:__________________________________________
Title of work:____________________________________________
Description
At the end of the semester, you will submit to me this critique and draft along with your final draft of this essay. If you do not do such, you will receive an F for the incomplete assignment (refer to "Overview of Course").
I edited your essay in accordance with "Criteria for Evaluating Essays," using proofreader's marks (refer to "Proofreader's Marks"). As you revise this essay, do not correct only your punctuative, grammatical and mechanical mistakes. Remember, revision is a process. You will need to consider your peer's and my comments. Then, revise your essay according to its purpose, structure and content--checking for unity, checking for coherence, checking for development, creating a thesis. Next, edit each sentence, and title your essay.
Because this is a preliminary draft, I did not calculate a grade. If you want to do such, add the values of the applicable components (1-11, for example) and divide the sum by the amount of components (11, for example).
Evaluation
Name of writer:__________________________________________
Title of work:____________________________________________
I rated the following on a scale of 0 (poor) to 5 (excellent).
- Quality and clarity of working thesis _____
- Persuasiveness of argument _____
- Organization of essay _____
- Style of paragraphs _____
- Style of sentences _____
- Amount of punctuative mistakes (none is excellent) _____
- Amount of grammatical mistakes (none is excellent) _____
- Amount of mechanical mistakes (none is excellent) _____
- Quality of diction _____
- Tone of paper _____
- Format of essay _____
- Integration of quotations (if applicable) _____
- Style of documentation (if applicable) _____
- Amount of sources (if applicable) _____
I compared the essay (or sections of it) to the following.
- A color:_____________________________________________
- A flavor:____________________________________________
- A sound:____________________________________________
- A motion:___________________________________________
- An odor:____________________________________________
- An emotion:_________________________________________
